Thursday, April 26, 2012

blog 7

inciting incident: Ajax Moore is going out for a drive through town. Sloan and his 3rd anniversary was coming up soon so he was searching for something to get her. While staring at a little store that caught his attention; someone pulled out in front of him and he hit the other car. The cops were called and insurance information was shared. After all of it the cop pulls Ajax to the side and tells him that he thinks he recognizes him. Ajax assures him the must be mistaken and The cop, Officer Walker, insists that he knows him from somewhere else. After a few minutes Ajax finally gets away and leaves in his car. Still with no gift for Sloan.

Subplot: Ajax and Sloan's relationship becomes challenged as Ajax is off trying to fix the other issues in his life. Sloan does not understand why Ajax is going off all the time and is very distraught, she begins to assume the worse. Ajax refuses to tell her his secrets and wont tell her anything. Important dates and events go by with out Ajax's noticing. This continues to make Sloan very angry.

Having fun: You really get to know Sloan here as she goes away for a little while and stays with her family. She comes back after cooling down and Ajax has a breather from the rest of his problems. Him and Sloan spend time together and you get to know their relationship better and who they are. Simultaneously you see Officer Walkers life. This part is not as upbeat as the rest. You see his internal struggle with obsession and being alone. You really get to know why he has become the way he is.

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